tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post6776428393843721699..comments2024-01-31T22:52:59.436-05:00Comments on Sweet Little Bad Girl: Thicker Than Blood: Chapter FourIvanneth Maethorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10281499789304894480noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-92020293692495439042008-12-09T13:45:00.000-05:002008-12-09T13:45:00.000-05:00To be honest, I didn't know it was a deeper politi...To be honest, I didn't know it was a deeper political issue until I wrote that in. I'm just making this up as I go! The romantic stuff just happened, too, and that's actually tougher for me to write than the political side of things.<BR/><BR/>Val has the level of naievte that I had when I first moved out of my parents' and across the Atlantic. He's gotta wake up sooner or later...Ivanneth Maethorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10281499789304894480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-75810648427770318972008-12-09T13:21:00.000-05:002008-12-09T13:21:00.000-05:00The conflict between the 'establishment' and the f...The conflict between the 'establishment' and the freedom of the life of the pod pilot seems to fit well in the EVE universe.<BR/>Although I don't quite know where you are going with the story yet, the suggestion that the plot revolves around some political aspiration is also very much a part of what EVE is about. The whole of New Eden is about conflict and individual aspirations, whether in combat, the market, or in politics.<BR/>The romantic/sensual element is a little more than what I would think typical of the official chronicles, but not totally outside the norm.Leumashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04132124339444731481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-31518478961359863992008-12-09T05:04:00.000-05:002008-12-09T05:04:00.000-05:00You're weaving an exciting story. A bit sorry it t...You're weaving an exciting story. <BR/><BR/>A bit sorry it took so long for me to read it.Hallan Turrekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09815269368592695461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-18667501134270085062008-12-08T19:27:00.000-05:002008-12-08T19:27:00.000-05:00You know, Leumas? I'm so relieved by that! I wrote...You know, Leumas? I'm so relieved by that! I wrote this last bit and was thinking, 'It seems a little too simplistic, dunno if it works...' Thanks ^_^Ivanneth Maethorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10281499789304894480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-42798576159005339212008-12-08T17:46:00.000-05:002008-12-08T17:46:00.000-05:00Besides being a captivating story, it fits very we...Besides being a captivating story, it fits very well in to the EVE universe.<BR/><BR/>Looking forward (as always) to the next installment.Leumashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04132124339444731481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-76574086805794789582008-12-08T13:09:00.000-05:002008-12-08T13:09:00.000-05:00Ooooh, an intriguing chapter this.Kal.Ooooh, an intriguing chapter this.<BR/><BR/>Kal.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-4678214292440635582008-12-08T12:57:00.000-05:002008-12-08T12:57:00.000-05:00Great Chapter! I really like the story!..Keep it ...Great Chapter! I really like the story!..Keep it up...<BR/><BR/>~manasiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-382843540790360746.post-62030618009385520752008-12-08T10:05:00.000-05:002008-12-08T10:05:00.000-05:00Good ambiance and duologue. I'm really enjoying th...Good ambiance and duologue. I'm really enjoying this series. It's very easy to picture the scene in my head without too much description from you. Always a good sign.Bahamuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10317770019024827162noreply@blogger.com